1dering at stars

Last night I danced on the treetops; With silver slippers of dew, We whirled and twirled as moonlight unfurled, To the nightingale’s honey-glazed coo And I dreamed that I was ...

Fly softly over my fields When you shake your feathers loose Sing slowly down Lilting On frozen air like slices of glass Sit softly by my window When you tremble ...

I'm not really sure if this is the right place for this but... This is something I wrote a few years ago, originally it was a short song, It's not ...

So you would leave us, would you? You would leave us here? Here on this swirling ball of self destruction, plummeting, flying, hurling, to a blank, white, screen of fear. ...

Through the ocean spilling from your eyes, can you laugh at the world’s sorrow, simply because it is so ironic? If you had a chance to never have existed, would ...

You don’t see what I see. Do you know that I can see them? No. Really. If you wanted, I could tell you what they looked like. I could describe ...

I'm really not sure at all about this piece.... of course it makes sense to me but..... I'm not sure if anyone else will understand it. So please review! I ...

I could really use some help with this! Do the images work? Does it make sense to anyone but myself? Is the ending strong enough? Please review! Thanks guys! Every ...

I'm back!!!!! Any critiques are greatly appreciated, and I hope you will rip and tear away as you please! I'm wondering if the meaning is clear in this..... Leave me ...